Beauty of Isolation

In this empty space
With no walls 
With nothing but individual trees
And only during sunset 
it's the  sunlight causing their shadows
 and Warming over the place 
In this empty space
With no walls
And no man-kind crossing 
Silence the one remaining 
A force inside me towards this liberty 
just what i have imagined in my fanatasy 
Solitude  with nature 
with no one else but the one who created me 
I stare at this beauty of nature , The more i believe 
In this empty space
with no walls 
with nothing but individual trees 
Fulfilling  the beauty of isolation
the beauty of real liberty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Hussin Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 6:55 AM
Thanks .. that's the one i added to the contest :) wish me luck bro !
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October 8, 2008 at 4:44 PM
Nicely descriptive, i feel like it's me standing there. I like.
Hussin Avatar
October 7, 2008 at 8:47 AM
Thanks guys . I hope i would enjoy my time here too :):)
Jordan Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 5:50 AM
Very peaceful and relaxing poem - I enjoyed the read - allow me to welcome you to the soup - God Bless
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