Beauty of Evening

Beauty of evening

At evening of life
When sunsets to smile.
Haze atmosphere romantically invites me.
She looks pale.
Not loosen her beauty
She is not naughty.
Her bright face is shrouded by black curling hairs.
Where black hairs looks like black clouds.
Still her pale face looks hazy.
She is now feeling insusceptibility.
It seems that it is haze.
Still beauty remains on her face.


Saroj khan[sakha]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Khan Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 11:02 PM
Appreciation
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work about a beautiful person in your life..Sara
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December 14, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Sarojkumar, the beauty you write of was perfect... I much enjoyed this .... xox...LINDA
Young Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 9:31 AM
wwooo... u sereously r in love man.:) truly speaking u have expressed it in a very beutiful manner.
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