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Beauty Is a Flame

Beauty is a flame-- Short if shallow, long if true-- Painful when not understood-- Yet a delight if you could-- It burns my heart 12/12/'10

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:08:00 AM

yes, a lovely burning heart... by the way this is a verse... and i like it... where is the rhyme... look up free verse... Gabe, don't take your heart to close to the heat... xox~ PD

Gabe Shelly
Date: 5/25/2013 12:19:00 PM

Your right it is a verse, thanks. gabe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2013 7:46:00 PM

Gabe, hi... soup-mail...Linda

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/9/2013 5:25:00 PM

Nice poem, so much covered in so few lines, a wonderful read well done.

Gabe Shelly
Date: 5/9/2013 5:52:00 PM

Thanks-- please read some of my other verses.