Beauty In the Sky

against sunset peaks
            starlings whir over wide plains-
                      shaping bold live art












Written on 3/15/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Hello Laura Leiser, you never know what type of art form Mother nature will make with her clouds.It is always different. have a nice evening my friend.
Leiser Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Thanks for commenting, Darlene! :)
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Well done Haiku Laura
Leiser Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thank you, Allen. I appreciate your kind comment! :)
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:26 PM
oh, this is lovely
Leiser Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Thanks so much, Jack! :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:02 PM
this was very lovely, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:53 AM
Scenic and beautiful Laura. Don't forget to put the — after plains. It is in her rules. have a wonderful St. Patrick's Day my friend! xxoo : )
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Too late, I didn’t place...but thanks for the heads up, Connie!
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Lovely Laura...
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Thank you, Charlie! Glad you liked this :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful image Laura. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, Tom! :)
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Hi Laura, This is just beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Leiser Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis! :)
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