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Beauty Exposed

One blossom's beauty left exposed Against tender green leaves Beneath upon the ground spring's joy Wild Violets interweave Soon solid gray damp mass of clouds Will dump a pouring rain While the plump Mourning Dove sits fluffed Against the damp cold pain Breakfast is cooked and served up now The feeding frenzy gone I'll go split an atom or two These dreams build upon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/19/2014 12:07:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 5/1/2014 10:01:00 PM
A vision you paint with words. Amazing mind and such talent. Bravo..
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Date: 4/8/2014 6:49:00 PM
Wow Sara! Painting a beautiful scene. Threatening rain alerting the lonely dove of the approaching storm. I love the ending. Splitting atom bringing impeding doom. I LIKE IT. Just my take. Beautifully done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/9/2014 5:33:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by..If life is filled with sameness, we have to add some humor or have a little dream..I am the farthest from spliting an atom not mathmatical at all..Sara
Date: 4/8/2014 1:00:00 AM
I really liked the first two verses, Sara. Such beautiful imagery. Well done.
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Date: 4/7/2014 10:26:00 PM
I clicked because I thought this was about me!!! Instead I find its simply a very beautiful poem!! :) Loved it!
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:42:00 PM
Really enjoyed this poem Sara and intrigued by the last two lines
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Date: 4/6/2014 4:35:00 PM
First As Usual, In Regards Unto Your Visit And Comment: Tis Easy To Imagine Quite A Few Of Their Babies At Battle; Due Unto Many Factors Around Her World Including Extreme Fatigue, Lack In Nutrition And Death All About -- Their Slipping Beyound These Edges Called Sanity ? Surreal The Scene As One Day Given A Medal By, Yes, Hypocrasy And The True Enemy....Interesting Poem Sara ? Thank You, For Stopping By And Have A Beautiful Evening...Love, Jeremy
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/6/2014 6:36:00 PM
Jeremy, Thanks for reading and taking time to comment on my work..Your visits are valuable to me..It encourages me to keep on writing..Soup Mail.. Sara
Date: 4/6/2014 3:38:00 PM
nature becomes you, sara.. how descriptive and spledid is this slice of springtime!... beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 4/6/2014 1:50:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on James Connonlly he was a great man, I wrote it for my son Patrick he is one of his hero's of Irish history. Love your words of beauty by the way my lady of nature great job here for you also. cheri
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:33:00 AM
The imagery here is outstanding. This is a great read to wake up to and start the day. Thank you for stopping by and leading here to this beautiful poem of yours Sara. Such a warm felt sensation after reading. ..Thank you for sharing. .. :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 8:45:00 AM
This is an outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this morning! What a fabulous piece, quite the remarkable poem, Great Work!!
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