Beauty and the Beast - Mystic

Surreal her slumber with the cat
 Enchanting jungle lullabies
 In the midst of its habitat
 Surreal her slumber with the cat
 What charms does she posess at that
 To make the tiger close its eyes
 Surreal her slumber with the cat
 Enchanting jungle lullabies
              --
 9/23/17
 Contest Name: Image me a Poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 4, 2017 at 6:42 AM
A lovely Triolet Joseph, good luck in the contest....Maria
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October 4, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Maria
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October 2, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Hi Joseph, You did good in the " triolet" form. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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October 4, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Wonderful Trio-let- ing!!! I love it.
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October 4, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Andrea
Daniel Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:02 PM
I was impressed with the same image, Joseph, lovely triolet you have written here:) hope I can pen something as beautiful before the contest closes...
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October 4, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Jo
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September 24, 2017 at 12:18 AM
Very well crafted Joseph!
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October 4, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Arthur
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September 23, 2017 at 9:07 PM
A nice image! <3
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October 4, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Thank you Kim
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September 23, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Such well written piece--charming lines--best wishes for a win!
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September 23, 2017 at 7:35 PM
Thank you Vijay
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:59 PM
The imagery in your write is amazing Joseph, as is the rhyme. Great word selection too. Loved it! Totally enjoyed your poem this evening. Good luck in the contest!:)
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September 23, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Susan
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September 23, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Wow Joseph! What a great Triolet! Nicely done. Good luck in the contest :)
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September 23, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Heidi
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