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Beauty and Diversity

Why I ask would I wait for spring laden with the vibrant symphony? If velvet green curtain is all it brings, with lark and jay playing the same melody! Why would I revere the palette supreme, the strokes of the brush divine? If all of us were tall, light and lean with perfect pearls in each smile! I know why there’s no beauty in bloodshed Because it’s just monochromatic red!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 10:57:00 AM
Poignant write Sara.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/29/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks James!
Date: 4/21/2016 9:07:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Sara:-) hugs jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/21/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for reading Jan!
Date: 4/20/2016 10:48:00 AM
Sara, another perspective on spring. Your palette of colors includes red, a primary color. Quite a contrast to the abundance of verdancy throughout your canvas. The last two lines make your poem pop. All the best, Sonia.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/21/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Sonia!

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