Beauty

as moon peeks 
through willow’s branches. . . 
his long lashes

For Line Gauthier's  Bite Size Poem No.42 Poetry Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:38:00 PM

WOW.... Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 2:39:00 PM

An excellent haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2015 1:59:00 PM

This is a sweet one !! Nicely done, Andrea!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/14/2015 10:46:00 AM

Hi Andie .. on my way to greet you a big congratulations!!! ^_^

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 10:12:00 AM

Andrea, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your 2nd place win:) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/14/2015 9:06:00 AM

Brilliant haiku with stunning imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2015 8:49:00 AM

Excellent and imaginative..I love it! #7 Congratulations Andrea; very merited. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2015 6:19:00 AM

Great write and win Andrea...Congrats

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/14/2015 4:25:00 AM

nice haiku Andrea congrats on 2nd place hugs

MD Johnson

Date: 6/13/2015 11:17:00 PM

Love the long dark lashes. Congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 8:59:00 PM

I knew the haiku looked familiar.Who says, you can't enjoy a haiku for the third time. LOL, in this case, 7th time. I read this one so many times. Andrea. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:53:00 AM

I'm still not haiku bored. LOL.....Andrea, your mind falls deep. love it * Forever ~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/5/2014 11:52:00 PM

Love those lashes :) ,,, how are you my friend, I know I haven't been on that much.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/29/2014 10:34:00 AM

nice one. love phyl

Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/22/2014 5:50:00 PM

Nature holds all true beauty. And this is like a vine of praise to the Creator. Yeah, Ruth was not fun at all and felt flat. No Billy's or Joan's in that one. Then I had 1 1 2 2 rhyme and had to change to 1 2 2 1. Flipped to the verse like 30 times. Sometimes I take a break and then it all kicks in the next day. Good luck and ask Him for a little help for we're spreading His Word. Take Care!