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Beauty

as the moon peeks through the willow’s slender branches. . . his long eyelashes Written 1/15/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/15/2015 8:38:00 PM
WOW.... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:39:00 PM
An excellent haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:59:00 PM
This is a sweet one !! Nicely done, Andrea!
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:46:00 AM
Hi Andie .. on my way to greet you a big congratulations!!! ^_^
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:12:00 AM
Andrea, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your 2nd place win:) Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:06:00 AM
Brilliant haiku with stunning imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 6/14/2015 8:49:00 AM
Excellent and imaginative..I love it! #7 Congratulations Andrea; very merited. // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 6:19:00 AM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
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Date: 6/14/2015 4:25:00 AM
nice haiku Andrea congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 6/13/2015 11:17:00 PM
Love the long dark lashes. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:59:00 PM
I knew the haiku looked familiar.Who says, you can't enjoy a haiku for the third time. LOL, in this case, 7th time. I read this one so many times. Andrea. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:53:00 AM
I'm still not haiku bored. LOL.....Andrea, your mind falls deep. love it * Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/5/2014 11:52:00 PM
Love those lashes :) ,,, how are you my friend, I know I haven't been on that much.
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:34:00 AM
nice one. love phyl
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:50:00 PM
Nature holds all true beauty. And this is like a vine of praise to the Creator. Yeah, Ruth was not fun at all and felt flat. No Billy's or Joan's in that one. Then I had 1 1 2 2 rhyme and had to change to 1 2 2 1. Flipped to the verse like 30 times. Sometimes I take a break and then it all kicks in the next day. Good luck and ask Him for a little help for we're spreading His Word. Take Care!
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Date: 2/2/2014 6:30:00 AM
congrats and 7 mt
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Date: 2/2/2014 6:29:00 AM
I see a tree outside a bedroom window. like it.
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Date: 1/24/2014 10:06:00 PM
Love the line "his long dark lashes" and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/24/2014 7:22:00 AM
You definitely see with a poet's eyes. Stunning!
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:40:00 AM
Nicely captured and congrats on your win. Loved always,my friend, bl
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Date: 1/23/2014 6:55:00 AM
Nice haiku. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:09:00 AM
Ooooh, Andrea.. I just felt that 'something' which you feel after a beautiful haiku! Congrats on your win,, love...
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Date: 1/22/2014 2:33:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/21/2014 10:56:00 AM
I like this one, Andrea. So glad you placed. I see romance in the air...and a beautiful full moon!
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Date: 1/21/2014 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on beauty and congrats on the win, Andrea
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