Beauty

as moon peeks 
through willow’s branches. . . 
his long lashes

For Line Gauthier's  Bite Size Poem No.42 Poetry Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

June 15, 2015 at 8:38 PM

WOW.... Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman

June 15, 2015 at 2:39 PM

An excellent haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

June 14, 2015 at 1:59 PM

This is a sweet one !! Nicely done, Andrea!

Aiyah Torres

June 14, 2015 at 10:46 AM

Hi Andie .. on my way to greet you a big congratulations!!! ^_^

Alexis Y.

June 14, 2015 at 10:12 AM

Andrea, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your 2nd place win:) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

June 14, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Brilliant haiku with stunning imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita

Paul Callus

June 14, 2015 at 8:49 AM

Excellent and imaginative..I love it! #7 Congratulations Andrea; very merited. // paul

Joseph May

June 14, 2015 at 6:19 AM

Great write and win Andrea...Congrats

Shadow Hamilton

June 14, 2015 at 4:25 AM

nice haiku Andrea congrats on 2nd place hugs

MD Johnson

June 13, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Love the long dark lashes. Congratulations.

Skat A

June 13, 2015 at 8:59 PM

I knew the haiku looked familiar.Who says, you can't enjoy a haiku for the third time. LOL, in this case, 7th time. I read this one so many times. Andrea. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:53 AM

I'm still not haiku bored. LOL.....Andrea, your mind falls deep. love it * Forever ~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan

April 5, 2014 at 11:52 PM

Love those lashes :) ,,, how are you my friend, I know I haven't been on that much.

Phyllis Babcock

March 29, 2014 at 10:34 AM

nice one. love phyl

Vincent Flannery

February 22, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Nature holds all true beauty. And this is like a vine of praise to the Creator. Yeah, Ruth was not fun at all and felt flat. No Billy's or Joan's in that one. Then I had 1 1 2 2 rhyme and had to change to 1 2 2 1. Flipped to the verse like 30 times. Sometimes I take a break and then it all kicks in the next day. Good luck and ask Him for a little help for we're spreading His Word. Take Care!