Beauty

The sky dreary I guess some would call it scary I think it's beautiful In its own way Watching the light fade away Empty tree branches sway Whispering to stay Cold chill Sits so still There's a peace in the cold Standing there Watching it hold It doesn't lack beauty If you truly see The beauty gleams In everything

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/15/2013 3:59:00 AM

Lovely poem written here...great message that I get out of it.

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/15/2013 8:40:00 AM

Thank you! I'm so glad! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/12/2013 4:00:00 PM

a very nice and simple poem. Caleah, i love the sky as it fades away. thank you for the sweet thoughts of seeing the beauty in all the things around... i will call the image you are adoring epically beautiful... xox~ Lindakeva

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/13/2013 9:17:00 AM

Aww, thank you! Most of my family pretty much hates when it's rainy or dreary. So I decided to write a poem about how beautiful it can be if you just really look at it. :D

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2013 10:24:00 AM

It's all in your perspective. I like how you try to find the beauty in things that most would call "scary" or "unattractive". There's a Twilight Zone episode I watched called The Eye of the Beholder... really makes you think! Beautiful poem...

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 1:27:00 PM

:O I saw that episode! (The old Twilight Zone is way better) Yeah, I usually like to look at it all from different angles. What may look scary can actually be beautiful if you just open your eyes to see it.

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 4/9/2013 10:36:00 AM

Good one. Caleah, yes, beauty could be a decision and lies in the eye of the beholder, they say.

Caleah Buil
Date: 4/16/2013 4:24:00 PM

Thank you! That saying is so true!