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Beauty

lightening splits the sky lights your face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/10/2010 8:46:00 PM
An excellent Haiku Zera. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:18:00 PM
Just one flash of light and the beauty shows! Very nice haiku, Zera. Thanks for you comment. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:38:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration. I like uplifting view. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best withes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:27:00 PM
exactly. I thought beautiful when I read this!
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:53:00 AM
very good write I hate storms lightening and thunder to much for me have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:26:00 PM
Flashes from lightening easily light the room from outside during a storm....
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:53:00 PM
Nice images
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:50:00 PM
That would be scary to be that close so that the lightening would light the face...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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