Beauty

lightening
splits the sky
lights your face

epichaiku

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Phyllis Babcock

May 10, 2010 at 8:46 PM

An excellent Haiku Zera. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

May 10, 2010 at 4:18 PM

Just one flash of light and the beauty shows! Very nice haiku, Zera. Thanks for you comment. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes, Carolyn

May 10, 2010 at 1:38 PM

Nice use of alliteration. I like uplifting view. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best withes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen