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Beauty

i strive for beauty but i fail in my accord beauty demands a price, one i cannot possibly afford but for beauty i would give my life for without it life seems bleak for what makes life worth living is that of which we speak Our God is a God of beauty and he works in great detail he shapes the world around us and all that it entails to create our own beauty is to mirror God alone and to stand in awe of it is to bow down at his throne.

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Date: 8/22/2009 7:52:00 AM
a great poem my friend, God sees your heart he made us in his image, our true beauty lies within, you are his precius pearl welcome to poetry soup God bless you
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Date: 8/21/2009 5:58:00 PM
Blessings to you for sharing this faith message with us. So much truth to your words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/21/2009 2:13:00 AM
i also heard that God inspires it.... i think so... why not? he made man in his image.. :) Genesis... enjoy your day.
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Date: 8/20/2009 11:52:00 PM
I was told creating our own beauty was simply imagination... enjoyed this great piece and enjoy your night. :)
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Date: 8/20/2009 7:06:00 PM
Very nice, Aaron, and very true. An inspirational write this is. Love the imagery and the message and I agree. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:14:00 PM
god sees your beauty and the beauty in all of us. good write, keep up the good work. Welcome to the soup!
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:12:00 PM
thank you for the very kind comments :)
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful writng Aaron. Thank you for sharing it. Love Carol
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Date: 8/20/2009 11:47:00 AM
Deliteful Heroic Couplets,Aaron. I really enjoyed line 5. Keep writing. Sara
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