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Beauty

Your beauty is like a never ending song The melody is the words that poor from your heart. The rhythm is your life. The harmony is what makes you who you are. The song its self is the words that people try to write but they cant compare. Your a blooming rose, growing each day With such beauty, words can not say.

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Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 9/1/2009 4:25:00 PM

Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2009 7:21:00 AM

Love the way you see the melody, rhythm and harmony in the "beautiful" one! Very nice work, Elizabeth. And I will certainly pray for your friend and his father. It must be difficult to lose a parent when you are so young. Bless you for being there for him. Love, Carolyn

Arany P.

Date: 3/18/2009 11:52:00 PM

so passionate and sweet! ~ Arany

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/18/2009 8:28:00 PM

A delicate write that drips with romance. Beautiful! Smiles from Lolita

John Rhinem

Date: 3/18/2009 7:24:00 PM

Smile~What a lovely, passionate and flowing write Elizabeth! Filled with so much love for either someone in particula or all within general? Yet, either or, it is a most definately inspiring write dear lady! Excelllently expressed and written! Wonderful poem dear! Much warmth and blessings to you and your loved, john!:)