Beauty

Your beauty is like a never ending song 

The melody is the words that poor from your heart.

The rhythm is your life.

The harmony is what makes you who you are.

The song its self is the words that people try to write but they cant compare.

Your a blooming rose, growing each day 

With such beauty, words can not say.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eckiwaudah Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
Devonshire Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Love the way you see the melody, rhythm and harmony in the "beautiful" one! Very nice work, Elizabeth. And I will certainly pray for your friend and his father. It must be difficult to lose a parent when you are so young. Bless you for being there for him. Love, Carolyn
P. Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 11:52 PM
so passionate and sweet! ~ Arany
Townsend Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 8:28 PM
A delicate write that drips with romance. Beautiful! Smiles from Lolita
Rhinem Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 7:24 PM
Smile~What a lovely, passionate and flowing write Elizabeth! Filled with so much love for either someone in particula or all within general? Yet, either or, it is a most definately inspiring write dear lady! Excelllently expressed and written! Wonderful poem dear! Much warmth and blessings to you and your loved, john!:)
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