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Beauty

Fall
Starts
Patches
Fill with red
Yellow, gold, rust.
Cloudy, rainy day
Puts a damper on light's
Revealing forest's beauty. 
Then someone switches on the sun~
The illumination almost blinds~
Awesome is the masterpieces' radiance.

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Howard Kerr

May 20, 2026 at 11:26 PM

This is a beautiful poem in every way, Sara. The scenic imagery especialky appealed to me. Howard

Sara Kendrick

May 21, 2026 at 5:02 AM

Howard, I want to say thank you. I am delighted you dropped by to read it. Sara K.

M. L. Kiser

November 3, 2021 at 3:13 PM

Beautiful work here; well penned.

Sara Kendrick

November 4, 2021 at 2:24 PM

Why, thank you, M.L. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

November 3, 2021 at 2:30 AM

Another pretty write Sara, I love the line "Then someone switches on the sun~" Love it <3

Sara Kendrick

November 3, 2021 at 2:42 PM

Thank you, BJ..I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta

November 2, 2021 at 6:48 PM

Hi Sara, your Fibonacci is so eloquently written~you have painted a marvelous picture. The picture you included was a wonderful touch.... Blessings, Paulette

Sara Kendrick

November 3, 2021 at 7:26 AM

Paulette, I have to give the internet credit on the picture but I have seen scenes much like this and it is awesome on a nice fall day. Thanks for your visit which is uplifting. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

November 2, 2021 at 12:59 AM

Autumn is so beautiful, with its wondrous rustic colors spread out over woods and trees in the town - you describe it beautifully Sara, but I must say I enjoy a summer garden full of popping splendorous color. so well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jenny.

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2021 at 4:03 AM

Jennifer, Yes, the blossoms of summer are beautiful as well. I like the natural coloring of spring also. The different shades of green in a forest with the white of dogwood, the wild azaleas, redbud blossoms, etc. Beauty and allergy combined. Your visit is like a summer garden in full bloom. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

November 1, 2021 at 11:48 PM

Ah, this is a masterpiece my friend.

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2021 at 3:46 AM

Caren, Thanks for the visit. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

November 1, 2021 at 3:23 PM

The sun always makes everything looks that much brighter Sara, you expose your talent really well here. Thank you for sharing your eyes and pen today )

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2021 at 3:42 AM

Mystic, Yes, the sun can make our days come alive. Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara