Beauty

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Fall Starts Patches Fill with red Yellow, gold, rust. Cloudy, rainy day Puts a damper on light's Revealing forest's beauty. Then someone switches on the sun~ The illumination almost blinds~ Awesome is the masterpieces' radiance.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/3/2021 3:13:00 PM

Beautiful work here; well penned.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2021 2:24:00 PM

Why, thank you, M.L. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/3/2021 2:30:00 AM

Another pretty write Sara, I love the line "Then someone switches on the sun~" Love it <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 2:42:00 PM

Thank you, BJ..I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/2/2021 6:48:00 PM

Hi Sara, your Fibonacci is so eloquently written~you have painted a marvelous picture. The picture you included was a wonderful touch.... Blessings, Paulette

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2021 7:26:00 AM

Paulette, I have to give the internet credit on the picture but I have seen scenes much like this and it is awesome on a nice fall day. Thanks for your visit which is uplifting. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/2/2021 12:59:00 AM

Autumn is so beautiful, with its wondrous rustic colors spread out over woods and trees in the town - you describe it beautifully Sara, but I must say I enjoy a summer garden full of popping splendorous color. so well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jenny.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2021 4:03:00 AM

Jennifer, Yes, the blossoms of summer are beautiful as well. I like the natural coloring of spring also. The different shades of green in a forest with the white of dogwood, the wild azaleas, redbud blossoms, etc. Beauty and allergy combined. Your visit is like a summer garden in full bloom. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2021 11:48:00 PM

Ah, this is a masterpiece my friend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2021 3:46:00 AM

Caren, Thanks for the visit. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/1/2021 3:23:00 PM

The sun always makes everything looks that much brighter Sara, you expose your talent really well here. Thank you for sharing your eyes and pen today )

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2021 3:42:00 AM

Mystic, Yes, the sun can make our days come alive. Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara