Beautious Hummingbird

Tiny
Trochilidae
Beauty.

Long beak,
Sucking nectar 
You seek.

Rare sight,
Humming softly
Delight.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.27.2014
Contest: Whispers of a Muse
2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 8, 2014 at 8:57 AM
A beautiful description of a tiny delight, Brenda! Congrats to you and thanks for your comments on Dylan's poem. He will be excited to read it when he gets home from school. I think all the attention has gone to his head! LOL...hugs, Rhonda
Kayode Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 11:24 PM
I trust you, just way to go; congrats Brenda...huggs
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:05 PM
A beautious picture created!!! Congrats, Brenda.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 4:14 AM
N back again with wishes on ur winning awesome write Brenda!
De La Luna Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 2:43 AM
musical words, Brenda! love it! Big congrats!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Hija
May Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Beautiful...congrats on your win Brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Joseph
Simmons Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 6:59 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Fabulously beautiful....
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Don.
Callus Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on a deserved podium finish, Brenda. Your hummingbird is a delightful beauty...both the bird and the poem! // #7 // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 11:03 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words Paul.
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:00 AM
you make me want to watch this bird as this work delights, Brenda..thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Thank you so much Nette
Yvonne Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your huge second place win. A Fav!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Thank Maurice. You are so kind.
Haight Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Hi Brenda, I love your hummingbird poem! We had them near our house this past summer. Congratulations on your huge win! Would you believe that I forgot to enter my "Snow Dance" poem into the contest!! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Sandra. Ah, sorry to hear that Sandra. Last month I forgot to enter three poems. I was so upset.
Allison Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:26 AM
so so stunning Brenda my congrats for this wonderful write- delight to read them all again:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Thanks so much Jan.XOXO
Hamilton Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 6:03 PM
a perfect picture Brenda and a thrilling poem about this tiny bird gl in contest hugs 7
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:55 PM
Thank you Shadow
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:54 PM
truly love the vision this painted for me brenda have a wonderful weekend pal
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Liam
A. Sharma Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Indeed a beautiful write Brenda! Gl in contest!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Lamoureux Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:04 PM
A humming birds wings do sound like a whisper. This is indeed beauteous.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Richard.
Sirak Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:29 AM
This is just lovely. One summer a hummingbird hung around our porch buzzing around our heads. We called her Minnie Pearl.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Monterey. Minnie Pearl, how sweet!
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 3:14 AM
- Love it .... so sweet, dear Brenda - Luck in contest ! - I wish you a beautiful weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Oh what a unique take on the theme Brenda - i LOVE it! good luck! Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thanks so much Jan.
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