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Beautifully Yours

I am a grain of sand; you, an oyster - Solely into your arms I will curl, With your love wrap me over; layer over layer, Transmute me into your aeonian pearl.

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/30/2019 1:59:00 AM

Beautiful stayed my friend!;)

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 10/30/2019 9:55:00 AM

Thank you :)

Ann Foster

Date: 9/30/2019 9:07:00 AM

So intense. Sweet, innocent, yet... Great work... very romantic. Write more please... :) Ann

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 10/1/2019 12:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann! More coming up soon! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2019 3:27:00 PM

how beautiful this little poem is . a precious little pearl!

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 8/19/2019 8:14:00 PM

So sweet of you! Thank you so much :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/16/2019 10:43:00 AM

Very well crafted my new found friend...sending great welcomes to the soup...^WW^ :o)

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 8/16/2019 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much! :) Love your poems as well! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 2:48:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Ashmi :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 8/16/2019 8:57:00 AM

Thank you so much! Love and best wishes! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/15/2019 5:32:00 PM

The divine essence of the timely created pearl emanates from your lines as the finest pearls are formed in oysters vs clams. Beautiful Ashmi! Congratulations on your deserving podium win! Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 8/15/2019 8:02:00 PM

Thank you so much ma'am! Your words encourage me and motivate me to keep writing! Thank you so much! :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/4/2019 10:57:00 AM

Ashmi, This pearl of a poem bespeaks a wonderful future for you. Well done. -Richard

Ashmi Sheth
Date: 8/4/2019 11:12:00 AM

Oh my God! I'm feel honoured to get such a response from you! Thank you so very much! :)