Beautifully Yours

I am a grain of sand; you, an oyster - 
Solely into your arms I will curl,
With your love wrap me over; layer over layer,
Transmute me into your aeonian pearl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Beautiful stayed my friend!;)
Sheth Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Thank you :)
Foster Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:07 AM
So intense. Sweet, innocent, yet... Great work... very romantic. Write more please... :) Ann
Sheth Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:02 AM
Thank you so much Ann! More coming up soon! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:27 PM
how beautiful this little poem is . a precious little pearl!
Sheth Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 8:14 PM
So sweet of you! Thank you so much :)
Warrior Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Very well crafted my new found friend...sending great welcomes to the soup...^WW^ :o)
Sheth Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Thank you so much! :) Love your poems as well! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 2:48 AM
- A beautiful poem, Ashmi :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sheth Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Thank you so much! Love and best wishes! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 5:32 PM
The divine essence of the timely created pearl emanates from your lines as the finest pearls are formed in oysters vs clams. Beautiful Ashmi! Congratulations on your deserving podium win! Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
Sheth Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Thank you so much ma'am! Your words encourage me and motivate me to keep writing! Thank you so much! :)
Theraven Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Ashmi, This pearl of a poem bespeaks a wonderful future for you. Well done. -Richard
Sheth Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Oh my God! I'm feel honoured to get such a response from you! Thank you so very much! :)
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