Beautiful You

Beautiful You


When Heaven opens up, I feel the spill; the rain; the pour - 
I know your heart still breaks, and you need to cry some more.

When you think you're alone, with no-one beside you to listen - 
Remember I'm here along side you, drying the tears that glisten.

          I see you in mind's eye; your soul is open wide - 
          I am not gone, I did not die; I'm always by your side.

          Through your eyes, I see; my soul can boldly stride - 
          Born again, I'm free, as together our world's collide.

Over lush green grass I canter, I sprint; I bound and play - 
Infecting flowers with laughter; a breeze tickling their gentle sway.

Twinkling star called love; it's beauty is you; love's abound - 
A playful sun through cotton clouds, and dancing trees surround.

          If the sunny breeze is a voice so warm; grass, loving hands so true - 
          If flowers and trees, a form - then the beauty around me is you.

          Linked by love, so symphonic; I know, we're never apart - 
          Calming sound, so melodic; It's the music of your heart.
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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Em,ma. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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August 2, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Emma, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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June 4, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Love it,congrats on your feature. Thanks for sharing with us
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Emma Jane. Love, Carol
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May 30, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Emma
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May 29, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Emma~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
Bdosa Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Very nice and re-assuring stuff, thoughts we need and cherish as we go through life. How much more personal and wonderful can poetry be? I love it.
Olomi Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Jane, you touched my heart with that poetic whisper of love. You have a better way to reach a yearning heart. I love the piece. It's truly in you. Go on and explore it all the more. Thank you!
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March 24, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be filled with fun and sharing luv.. check out our contests..they are free..good luck luv..
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March 24, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Such a valuable piece. Respect for this...gorgeous!
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Emma. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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