Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Haiku

'beautiful Sunset'

a sublime sky view
oranges, yellows, bronze effects...
mellow clouds blend in


Entry: Sunset(Haiku)
Sponsor: P.D.
Written by: Carol Brown
Written on: 11/05/2011
7th Place Winner

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Daver Austin September 30, 2015 at 10:27 AM Love those "mellow clouds." Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 5:47 PM Thank you Carol, for the visit... Stopping by to read this one again.. Linda

Bl Devnath February 9, 2012 at 11:14 AM Beautiful Sun set, enjoyed after many days. Wonderful write, loved, bl

Anonymous Dreamer December 5, 2011 at 6:54 PM Beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win and thanks for the warm welcome you gave me! :)

Sandy Mason December 1, 2011 at 2:18 PM What a beautiful word picture written with such simplicity.

John Freeman November 16, 2011 at 12:02 PM Congratulations on your win Carol. I've been reading a lot of Haiku down the list from you, Good luck in your endeavor. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 8, 2011 at 6:00 PM Congrats Carol on another brilliant win for these mesmerizing lines of beautiful Haiku my friend... luv..to u...blessings too..

Carolyn Devonshire November 8, 2011 at 12:32 PM I knew this would be a winner, Carol. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Janette Fisher November 8, 2011 at 11:44 AM Many congrats Carol on your wonderful haiku winning in PD's contest - luv Janette

Fabiyas M V November 8, 2011 at 10:03 AM Beautiful Haiku,Carol.Congratulations on your great win!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon November 8, 2011 at 8:16 AM Congrats Carol for your win...:)

Shannon Deane November 8, 2011 at 7:14 AM Beautiful Haiku Carol...congrats to you for your win in the contest and thank you for your kind comments...luv shannon

Carol Sunshine Brown November 8, 2011 at 6:00 AM Thank you everyone for your comments and congrats. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

David Williams November 8, 2011 at 1:42 AM Carol congrats on your great win..David

Olusegun Arowolo November 8, 2011 at 1:34 AM Nice Haiku,Carol.I love it esp-the sublime sky view.Congrats on your win....Thanks a million for your comments,your words serve as tonic.keep flying my good friend......shalom...

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2011 at 10:05 PM Congratulations on your lovely poem's win!

Poet Destroyer A November 7, 2011 at 10:00 PM CAROL~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d. Carol Sunshine Brown November 8, 2011 at 5:59 AM Thank you P.D. for the placement in your contest. Love, Carol

Don Johnson November 7, 2011 at 9:35 PM Congratulations on a great poem here Carol.

Don Johnson November 7, 2011 at 8:55 PM sunset is the sweetest clime, when colors surely blend, thank you Carol for your time, the time with me you spend...

Gwendolen Song November 7, 2011 at 8:48 PM It's the blending in of these colours that I love the most, Carol. A picturesque view indeed. Love, Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto November 7, 2011 at 2:30 PM This is one bad mama jamma! I like your sunsets better than the ones I have been seeing lately. Pollution, Smog, Chem trails, Com trails, Armageddon looking clouds :)

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2011 at 12:31 PM Very descriptive of a sunset..No two are alike..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

Kash Poet November 7, 2011 at 6:14 AM Wonderful sunset haiku Carol.Best wishes in the contest.

Kimberly Larocca November 6, 2011 at 7:32 PM Beautiful as always, good luck.

Elizabeth Wesley November 6, 2011 at 4:12 PM Lovely sunset Carol, best wishes in the contest!

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