Beautiful Sun

The sun is beautifly shining
The heat is warming my back
I'm feeling good and so satisfied
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 2:43 PM
I LOVE this feeling. Good one, Kaila.
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:04 AM
A wonderful Senryu, Kaila.
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