Get Your Premium Membership

Beautiful Summer

brash waves of ocean glitters sparkling in the sea they rise like a man! white sands at the beach the huge-grained dreamy castle eaten by the waves. the sun shines so bright matches to perfect blue skies birds went to parade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/15/2021 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win ... in 2021, Lei :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/10/2015 11:15:00 AM
Lei, the second and last are my fav. Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 11:03:00 AM
Lovely little Choka sequence, You've created the perfect beach scene! ~Jan
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 6:59:00 AM
No, not yet. Will have to check your list. But that's very nice of you! :):)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2015 6:52:00 AM
Wow...quadruple feat of haiku! I was there! You're getting the hang of it, kabayan! PS. You might want to refine line 2 of haiku 3. Otherwise, it's good! HUgs! Ate Kim
Login to Reply
Strauss Avatar
Lei Strauss
Date: 4/28/2015 6:53:00 AM
You taught me well Ate Kim! :) Have you read my poem "Miss Kim"?