Lei Strauss Poet Haiku

Beautiful Summer

brash waves of ocean
glitters sparkling in the sea
they rise like a man!

white sands at the beach
the huge-grained dreamy castle
eaten by the waves.

the sun shines so bright
matches to perfect blue skies
birds went to parade.

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 12:06 PM - Congratulations on your win ... in 2021, Lei :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A May 10, 2015 at 11:15 AM Lei, the second and last are my fav. Hugs* SKAT

Jaycee Cervenka April 28, 2015 at 11:03 AM Lovely little Choka sequence, You've created the perfect beach scene! ~Jan

Kp Nunez April 28, 2015 at 6:59 AM No, not yet. Will have to check your list. But that's very nice of you! :):)

Kp Nunez April 28, 2015 at 6:52 AM Wow...quadruple feat of haiku! I was there! You're getting the hang of it, kabayan! PS. You might want to refine line 2 of haiku 3. Otherwise, it's good! HUgs! Ate Kim Lei Strauss April 28, 2015 at 6:53 AM You taught me well Ate Kim! :) Have you read my poem "Miss Kim"?