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Beautiful Soul

She had the most beautiful soul i have ever seen in the darkest of the nights I'll speak for everyone when saying her laugh alone could make you feel free enough to take flight. With almost no effort, She was the only one who made me have faith in myself. Yet in search of love she found someone that made her feel she was so worthless she put herself on his shelf. He shut her bright light down until she barely existed, Without a care of the pain he inflicted. She lost herself in the chaos of his life, Only to end up alone and conflicted. This demon claimed love for her, He tricked her into thinking she would never be in need. Never will I understand why someone would destroy another person's glow after planting in their life a seed. As I lay in my lonely world i wonder if she could ever be found after this war she has fought to break free. will this beautiful soul be what she was in the start? I cry as i wish that i had the key.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/15/2011 3:21:00 AM
A very beautiful poem... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:04:00 PM
Creative and lovely expressions on the soul, beautiful, jacquueline
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:01:00 PM
Great poem
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jacqueline. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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