Beautiful Scenes Divinely Born, One of Three

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Robert J. Lindley, 10-02-2020
Cinquain, Sonnet, Cinquain
(CSC)...
 
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After having regained a bit of my former self.
I wrote three dark poems- while in my melancholy state.
I will maybe post those at a later date.
Decided to post this positive, uplifting and imaged 
filled poem as my comeback presentation. And decided
to work with a different form. A combo idea I have had
for a long time but never got around to experimenting
with it. So please understand this is my very first
effort with it -my "virgin foray" into it so to speak.
I hope you may enjoy it and get something positive
and uplifting from its message, imagery and hope born
within. God bless...
*************
Beautiful Scenes And Treasures Divinely Born

Downward ...
	Soft specks falling,
Like echoes frozen white
Whispers sent from December skies
Downward.

(The Ancient Tree )..
Thereinto awe its magnificent trunk
sinking its teeth into soft virgin ground
earth paying no heed as each deeper sunk
as to its firm teether, the tree was bound.

Above grown reaching for bright sky and sun
umbrella limbs hanging massive and long
biggest was giant arms weighing a ton
handy stages for songbirds and sweeter song.

Morning sun's rays glistening eager leaves
as the dancing breeze moved them too and fro
beauty that stirs mankind to God believe
divine hands painted Nature's sweeping show.

Ancient tree in hidden forest gleaming
With beauty sublime and clear brooks streaming.

Winter  ...
   Ground creamy white,
Trees, moaning pallid skies
Children thanking Christmas break and
Winter.

Robert J. Lindley, 10-02-2020
Cinquain, Sonnet, Cinquain
(CSC)... one of three

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/4/2020 8:00:00 PM
My dear friend.. hurray for your "virgin foray"! I'm so glad you chose to experiment with this combo idea. The results are breathtaking imagery and deep, inspired emotions. Your poem is very moving and a masterwork reflecting the finesse of your thought and depth of your artistry. It is a grand pleasure to behold such poetic beauty, Robert. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/6/2020 7:08:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Ifelt it was time to write a bit differently than my norm. Glad you liked this one. God bless..
Date: 10/3/2020 12:32:00 AM
It was great to read your poetry once again, Robert... Your poem perfectly flows with imagery. Thank you for sharing each form. Linda
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/4/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thankou my friend. So wonderful to see you are back! I hope to gift us many more of your very fine creations.. God bless..
Date: 10/2/2020 7:12:00 PM
"Ancient tree in hidden forest gleaming, with beauty sublime and clear brooks streaming" Such a beautiful image you paint with your words. I love the entire poem. You have created a Masterpiece my dear friend. Nature is very inspiring. My best to you and yours. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/4/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I truly appreciate your reading and giving comment on this poem. I did my best to express beauty, positivity, depth and creativity in this piece.
Date: 10/2/2020 5:45:00 PM
Once again, you deliver.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/4/2020 8:06:00 AM
Thank you my friend. It is great to be back and writing. I hope to be able to do so and yet again enjoy the fellowship of the many very fine poets here.
Date: 10/2/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Robert! You are truly blessed to pen such magnificent verses and please keep writing on. And sharing your poetic Expertise. Panagiota Romios xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/4/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Ihope to do so and again find the immense and majestic pleasure of poetry and its beauty.
Date: 10/2/2020 12:25:00 PM
I like your triple creativity and superb imagery Robert, you never fail to impress us with your golden quill. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/4/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thank you my friend. A dear and very sweet blessing to be able to compose again.
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