Beautiful Paradise

One never wished for anything more
To be away from the worries of the  world overall

Invisible behind the curtain of writings
Treasuring a lesson from characters bearings

Where even a small pebble can whisper
And the sun will cheer for the blossoming flowers

Where every story will have a happy ending
The issues will be resolved and non pending

Capacity to bear such thoughts gift from ones ancestors
Acknowledge and to follow society's norms endorsed as expected measures

The moral values drifted from the straight path
One finds at cross roads, sanity demanding for the fresh start

Becoming a bearer of a constant companion
Offspring so pure and full of compassion

Just like one imagined the world to be
Unfortunately one can hope only, at present so rare to see

Joy and relief amalgamated as one
When selected as a teacher in giving lessons to children

Young ones whose preference is to play on the ground
Their logic seemingly more sound

Untainted by falsehood in any form
On whom the stains of deciet not remain strong

Rewarded with the licence for upbringing of life
One requests to be confined in such a beautiful paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:29 AM
A belated welcome to the soup.
Zubair Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thanks.
Callus Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Hi Samiha! I stopped by to have a look at your introductory poem on Soup. Overall a lovely poem which contains several phrases of note (exp. 3rd couplet). You pass on a sound message related to children. Imitating them would provide us with a better world. {I would change the form to 'verse' or 'couplet'.} Regards // paul
Zubair Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Thanks, i i will do that and if you have chance review my latest entry
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:15 PM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Samiha - Thanks for this nice poem "number one" from you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Zubair Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Dreams are needed to hope. They aspire us to live life to it's fullest. Keep in touch
Nau Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 2:42 PM
NICE lessons here. You want your poetry to teach and leave lessons for us. SUGGESTION: if you are going to stick to Rhyme, try a few poems with Exact word rhyme like, life and strife or flowers and powers. Get away from (as much as possible) just MATCHING suffixes (ing, ed,). If I pair up your word rhymes you have: more/overall, writings/bearings, whisper/flowers. Not really rhyme. Better by the end!
Zubair Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Thanks dear. I appreciate your suggestions.
A  Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Samiha, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
Zubair Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:54 PM
It makes me happy to be part of a family where i am being understood
Adams Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:57 AM
An enjoyable read. Welcome to Poetry Soup. It is a rewarding experience to be part of such a welcoming group.
Zubair Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thanks and i would really appreciate to groom my abilities under the sun of my mentors
A   Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Samiha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Zubair Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 2:32 AM
Thank you very much. I really need to hon my skills and i really appreciate whoever is willing to read my poems. Hope you will read my other writes too annd comment on it
Neels Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:57 AM
I enjoyed your write today, welcome to Poetrysoup as well ;) thank you for your comment on my write..
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Samiha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 5, 2015 at 12:44 AM
Thanks a lot SKAT A.I cant express how good i feel with your sensitive gesture and i hope that you really enjoy reading my poems.Take care and see more of my poems in the future
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