Beautiful Nature

the feel of the air
the look of the sky
stop and stare
my oh my
what a beautiful 
sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anish Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 2:11 PM
I like your poem. However I feel you should have left out the my oh my. It would give it more of a haiku type feel. Yeah, the look of the sky can be truly inspiring.
Knop Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 4:12 AM
Finally spring,Autumn! Nice write...Keep your pen flowing!...Gert
Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 4:57 PM
yes it is...spring is great! Light & Love
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March 19, 2010 at 4:06 PM
A refreshing look at the impact spring has on our spirits, Autumn. Nice poem! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Autumn. Love, Carol
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