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Beautiful Faerie

~Beautiful Faerie~ (Rhyme) Beautiful Faerie,Beautiful Faerie Where are thee beautiful maid The day outside is turning so aerie And the light it's nearing to fade. Beautiful Faerie, Beautiful Faerie With eyes the color of jade And lips the color of cherry And a sweet smile I can't evade. Beautiful Faerie, Feautiful faerie Without you the sky its becoming nightshade I need to find you again My Beautiful Faerie You! the one with the eyes the color of jade. Beautiful Faerie,Beautiful Faerie With the eyes the color of jade! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,13,2015
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Farber  Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Amazingly done. -Ana
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Darling D are you this fairie? I believe you are.Love-rajat
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Hi Rajat! Wish I was so I could live in a fairyland somewhere magical and so beautiful enchanting place. Thank you so kindly Rajat, my dearest friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. You're so sweet and dearest friend to me! Much appreciated!Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "
Dunn Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 9:36 AM
This is truely worth the read, it's so light and lovely, but it just has enough of sadness to it, but it also is very elegant my dear child of light, love the pic also it matches your words to a tea, lol cheri
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Thank you so kindly Cherl, my dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Always much appreciated! Your observations mean a lot to me. Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "
Cooper Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Cool poem I love it . Thank you. Love shanexxx
Cooper Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 1:18 PM
I have you listed in my favourite poets. I love you work. love Shane xxx :) <3
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so kindly Shane, my very dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. You're very kind! Always much appreciated! It means a lot to me.Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:32 AM
This is really beautiful! I loved it...Hugs, Deb
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so kindly Deb, dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! Glad you loved it.Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "
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