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Beautiful Earth

Earth, 
Planet
Of carbon
Life forms; spins fast,
Three sixty five days
And half, a year.
Freely spins;
Happy 
Ball.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 2:25 PM
A lovely write and a very interesting form; I have never tried this before; I'm tempted to write one! I can already make out the syllable formation. cu // paul
Kiser Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 3:17 PM
oh, you must try it. They are a lot of fun. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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