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Beautiful Disaster

more or less, i'm a mess, but looking at you I see a beautiful disaster, a calamity in progress like a powerful tornado spinning so fast in my chest, disturbing my breath, shuffle my words and all those makes me lose the sense of the reality…

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Date: 5/1/2019 12:02:00 AM
It sounds like you are in the clutches of a woman who is not afraid to toss you around a bit; a redeemable quality to have for sure!
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:22:00 PM
Nicely done :)
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