Beautiful Disaster

more or less, i'm a mess,
but looking at you
I see a beautiful disaster,
a calamity in progress
like a powerful tornado 
spinning so fast in my chest, 
disturbing my breath, 
shuffle my words 
and all those makes me lose 
the sense of the reality…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 12:02 AM
It sounds like you are in the clutches of a woman who is not afraid to toss you around a bit; a redeemable quality to have for sure!
Duncan Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Nicely done :)
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