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Beautiful Child

yesterday i had to say goodbye to a child with the purest soul i felt when she stared into my eye's she could of picked the lock to my soul and heart when you stare into the eyes of a newborn you will understand that their body is pure and free of sin,, and sometimes it reminds you of yourself and how pure our heart and soul is at the first moment of our lifes and you forget how our lives will turn out and we think of god's greatest creation......... life

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Date: 6/22/2011 1:30:00 AM
we need more people to let go of raw emotion in writing. I feel this way when looking into the innocence of children's eyes.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:29:00 PM
I am so touched by this beautiful piece. So sad, yet beautifully written from the heart and soul
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:21:00 PM
This is beautiful, Jacob. Filled with all the dreams parents have for their children. Welcome to Poetry Soup. There's a "Pink Joy" contest underway and this would make a great entry. Welcome to the Soup! If you want to enter, just look at the left-hand side of this page under "Contests" and click on the link to "Contests: by members." Awesome talent! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:41:00 PM
JACOB, WOW! IMAGINE JUST ONE PRECIOUS LOOK CAN UNLOCK ALL THAT... A PRICELESS LINE.... DEEP AND VERY MOVING,, THANKS ~ TAKE CARE,..P.D.
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