Beautiful Beginning To a Bad Ending

Beautiful beginning to a bad ending
lying all alone and restless
unable find any slumber, cant escape your  image,
sleepless, cant focus on
anything but your surrender,
tugging a vision with the rhythm that's in my head
the sound of you lying was when all hope was soon 
dead
so delighted with a new understanding
of how you could lie with the truth hidden from me
somewhere inside 
hostility and anger you through from the sky
and in disbelief i could only wonder why
while you stand there sighing with a look in your eye
waiting and watching with an innocent face all you wanted was this
to be our last goodbye,  

lying alone and restless in despair 
a lights shines down on me and cleans the air
she appears in front of me 
and looks at me with a gentle stare
gives me a hug and tells me that life's not fair 
says don't worry grabs my hand and tells me that she will always be there
that nothing is beyond her repair 
lonely eyes looked back at her as i spoke the words 
thank you,  your the only one who cares...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/12/2013 8:12:00 AM
WOW-- really romantic and emotive poem. Enjoyed this great write & welcome to P/Soup.
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:26:00 PM
I was attracted to your name to read your poem and glad that I did. It is exceptionally well written and a true depiction of relationships and the reality of them. I like the format and style too.
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