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Beautiful Angel

From a distance I saw her there Those tight jeans,that long satin hair Flowing in the breeze,like an Angel from above She casts a spell over m,a desire to feel her love But she's much to beautiful,for an ordinary man like me staring into her eyes,she fullfills every dream As she walks across the room,its hard to control my passion My heart throbs,my hands sweat,I feel myself colapsin As she cast's her spell over me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/26/2013 11:59:00 AM
Dennis, wow... some spell she cast on you. We women are good when it comes to casting them spell.. but it does not feel good when we fall into the cast itself.. ha ha... good and pretty...LINDA
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Date: 11/9/2012 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful women are not for us ordinary guys eh. Sure is nice to dream though! Holy crap! What am I saying, I'm seventy-seven! LOL Great write Dennis... cheers!
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