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Beautiful

Beautiful.
That is and will forever be the only way to describe her.
Not even the cold breeze on a warm day,
Or the hypnotising colours of the leaves in autumn 
Could amount to the feeling that you got when you saw her.
She was always so graceful and full of love,
She lit up a room from miles away,
Maybe it was because she seemed so perfect,
Maybe thats why no one cared to ask her how she was,
Would you ask blossomed flower if it needed water?
Maybe the answer is yes,
Maybe thats where we all went wrong,
She will forever be remembered as the light in the dark
Like the chirping bird on a cold winters day
Beautiful
That is and will forever be the only way to describe her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/16/2014 10:01:00 AM
Hi Jade! Beautiful is beautiful! Sad and touching, but you managed to pass the message through to us and to her. Very good poem; hope to read more of your work. // paul
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Date: 10/12/2014 5:16:00 PM
Hi Jade.. Powerful, introspective write! Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:11:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jade- I choose your first deep,beautiful and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:33:00 PM
wonderful imagery in this deep sad poem:-) Hugs jan xxxx
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:43:00 PM
Hi Jade, you described her well. Very deep indeed, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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