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Beating the Odds

Beating the Odds Life’s breath contained in heaving chest slow breaking wave in angry crest rushing toward the rock strewn shore ragged rocks that ripped and tore released the pain of rueful shriek warning call to those who seek. Never knowing what is real what to think - or feel never knowing how to free desires held inside of me dreams denied a resting place. Living on the edge of unopened window ledge peering through opaque distortions at life’s bizarre contortions. Betting on ideas better left unspoken lies promises, unbroken the odds stacked against Life. submitted to the “I Do Not Know Poetry Form Contest” sponsor – Andrea Dietrich 10/13/2014

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Date: 10/25/2014 7:20:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and congratulate you for your wonderful well-deserved win! Congratulations John! Pandita
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John.
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:10:00 AM
Fantastic write, congrats on the win, John
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:45:00 AM
deep poem with great imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2014 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations in my contest, John. I had it at HM and then decided it really deserved to be in the numbered list. I really like the first stanza, very descriptive,
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:47:00 PM
I know you well. good luck in the contest of the popular of sorts I've never cared, where who, what why. I don't know.
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Date: 10/15/2014 2:59:00 AM
Very wonderful write John! best wishes!
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:18:00 PM
I think you have done a fantastic job on this poem John. Good luck in the contest.
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