Beating the Odds

Beating the Odds


Life’s breath contained in heaving chest
slow breaking wave in angry crest
rushing toward the rock strewn shore
ragged rocks that ripped and tore
released the pain of rueful shriek
warning call to those who seek.

Never knowing what is real
what to think - or feel
never knowing how to free
desires held inside of me
dreams denied a resting place.

Living on the edge
of unopened window ledge
peering through opaque distortions
at life’s bizarre contortions.

Betting on ideas
better left unspoken
lies promises, unbroken

the odds
stacked against

Life.


submitted to the “I Do Not Know Poetry Form Contest”
sponsor – Andrea Dietrich
10/13/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:20 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and congratulate you for your wonderful well-deserved win! Congratulations John! Pandita
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations on your win John.
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Fantastic write, congrats on the win, John
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 4:45 AM
deep poem with great imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations in my contest, John. I had it at HM and then decided it really deserved to be in the numbered list. I really like the first stanza, very descriptive,
Cayton Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 12:47 PM
I know you well. good luck in the contest of the popular of sorts I've never cared, where who, what why. I don't know.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 2:59 AM
Very wonderful write John! best wishes!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:18 PM
I think you have done a fantastic job on this poem John. Good luck in the contest.
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