Beating Drum Rolls

Just wish in this lonely moment of time
I could hold and hug you right now dearest

Taking you love under my wings floating into another world 
Where smiles they dance with joy inside such a blessing gift

Having you sweet for-get-me-not's draws happy visions 
where the sunshine meets its brilliance at a rainbow's end 

Dazzling starlight of dreams whispers within this ocean
in the moon candlelight silver shadows tango 

Dancing flames together burning one fire in the light
that stands before me as the flames forever ignite loving you flies free

Hotly your the sunshine of life with eyes like stars 
silver sparkling diamond jewels drifting into your soul

Sunbeams warmly touch gently held in a smile 
that melts warmly into flutters of this heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/20/2015 6:36:00 AM
Wow best poetry on soup I think it's great x
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:22:00 PM
Hi Liam!A very beautiful, most romantic captivating love poem you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I just love it!A most beautiful dreamy,romantic,passionate,sweet love piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.A very tender, enchanting piece.A real gem!I truly enjoyed it a lot.A 7 +++!A fav!Your pen is mighty golden!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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