Beating

red dust in the air 
broom beaten beyond compare 
rug of grizzly bear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 8:08 AM
A grizzly bear rug? Wow! Back in the 30s I can remember beating hell out of our rugs on the clothesline. I was a kid (of course) and hated every minute of it. Now, if it had been a grizzly bear rug, well............Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 3:23 PM
VEry interesting and humorous picture painted.
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