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Beating

Analytical satire Starts a fire As the guitar strings turn up the heat The drummer is oh so sweet Voicing the inner desire But don't be a liar Or a cheat Read Keat And build a new pyre Worship the one and only sire Pick a seat Take a stand, get on your feet Push higher Walk the wire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2009 12:50:00 AM
very powerful... you have written a wonderful message... and loved the rhymes too! nicely done ~ Arany
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Date: 3/10/2009 3:09:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a thought provoking poem. Yes, one needs to take a stand in life. Keep on writing! Karen
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