Beatdown

Hey! All my Halloween candy is gone!
I know exactly what has gone wrong
That sneaky little rat slithered into my place
Found my stash and stuffed his face

Got you pinned down on the bed
Your eyes are bugging out, I wish you dead
No use trying to get free and run
Your beatdown has just begun

Go ahead and scream for mum through the door
It wont do any good she's gone to the store
There will be no rescue coming your way
I'm going to enjoy this beatdown today

But I find its an embarrassing disgrace
I cant beat that grin off your face
You say you just got even with me
For stealing your candy last Easter you see

If I were your brother Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Bobby May
10/15/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Even stevens. (lol) Great write Timothy. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie
Mcguire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Charles!
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 5:08 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Timothy - // Anne-Lise :)
Mcguire Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so much Sunshine!
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 2:51 PM
I'd be afraid to see a WWF super-star like you coming at me down a dark alley on Halloween night. Boo-whoa! So, tell me, when is Bobby expected to get out of the hospital?! LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest, Timothy! Cheers, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 6:38 PM
How about a compromise, Timothy: We're both Souper Stars! That puts the right shine on things! Warmest wishes always, Gershon
Mcguire Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:38 PM
If anyone is a Souper Star it is you and your fine work!
Mcguire Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Thanks Gershon, big brothers have a way of inflicting pain without leaving any marks! :)
May Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your placement Timothy
Mcguire Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Bobby
Matt Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 3:36 AM
This reminds me of my big sister Very nice humour good pen #Matt
Mcguire Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Thanks PM!
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Bravo. Wonderful humor, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Thank you LINE!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 9:11 AM
I didn't have brothers or sisters, so would have enjoyed them. I did have cousins I was close to, though... the good old days. Enjoyed your write and hope it's a winner. Blessings and prayers, Gina
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 6:09 PM
It is a thing between brothers. a fight many times means love.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 8:24 AM
This brings back memories of my older brother. Good luck in the contest.
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 6:09 PM
You got that right, thanks
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