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Beatdown

Hey! All my Halloween candy is gone! I know exactly what has gone wrong That sneaky little rat slithered into my place Found my stash and stuffed his face Got you pinned down on the bed Your eyes are bugging out, I wish you dead No use trying to get free and run Your beatdown has just begun Go ahead and scream for mum through the door It wont do any good she's gone to the store There will be no rescue coming your way I'm going to enjoy this beatdown today But I find its an embarrassing disgrace I cant beat that grin off your face You say you just got even with me For stealing your candy last Easter you see If I were your brother Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 10/15/19

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:47:00 AM

Even stevens. (lol) Great write Timothy. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Charles!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 5:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Timothy - // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Sunshine!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 2:51:00 PM

I'd be afraid to see a WWF super-star like you coming at me down a dark alley on Halloween night. Boo-whoa! So, tell me, when is Bobby expected to get out of the hospital?! LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest, Timothy! Cheers, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2019 6:38:00 PM

How about a compromise, Timothy: We're both Souper Stars! That puts the right shine on things! Warmest wishes always, Gershon

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/30/2019 5:38:00 PM

If anyone is a Souper Star it is you and your fine work!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/30/2019 5:36:00 PM

Thanks Gershon, big brothers have a way of inflicting pain without leaving any marks! :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement Timothy

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/30/2019 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Bobby

Phatt Matt

Date: 10/18/2019 3:36:00 AM

This reminds me of my big sister Very nice humour good pen #Matt

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/18/2019 7:01:00 PM

Thanks PM!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/17/2019 10:59:00 PM

Bravo. Wonderful humor, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/18/2019 7:01:00 PM

Thank you LINE!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/16/2019 9:11:00 AM

I didn't have brothers or sisters, so would have enjoyed them. I did have cousins I was close to, though... the good old days. Enjoyed your write and hope it's a winner. Blessings and prayers, Gina

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/16/2019 6:09:00 PM

It is a thing between brothers. a fight many times means love.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 8:24:00 AM

This brings back memories of my older brother. Good luck in the contest.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/16/2019 6:09:00 PM

You got that right, thanks