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beasts preparing seek

beasts preparing seek... delicious nuts, hibernates sleep surrenders chill

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Date: 12/2/2011 10:50:00 AM
Yeah another 'non boring' haiku-I have only read a handful that I actually like and yours are two of them. Very impressive Ed..btw love your avatar...did you use photoshop-very artistic!
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Edward McCormick
Date: 12/2/2011 11:10:00 AM
LOL, that's beautiful to hear from you Natalie, thank you! It took me over 20 years to finally just begin to grasp the intricacy of haiku. I'm still very unsure and cautious with it.. :) Not photoshoped, my pic was simply a seredipitous webcam snapshot with lucky lighting... So glad you enjoy! =)~ECMc
Date: 11/8/2011 2:28:00 AM
Very good haiku.Thanx for reading and commenting at my page.
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Date: 11/7/2011 2:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your delightful work..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
This would make a great entry for Charles Henderson's Nature Haiku contest, Edward. You might want to look at the contest and enter this awesome poem. Love, Carolyn
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