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emotions they flutter, and lessons are learned, beware of the eyes of the beast, charmed by the snake, bird hesitates, so hypnotised, now it cant speak. so it's now up the creek:( (cactus, snake do do) cactus ratshoot was the bird, after the snake had scoffed him on, a sweet delight, and he was gone, anon, too right momma...
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Date: 10/7/2011 8:12:00 AM
Don, I'm putting in my favorites. Tony
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Date: 10/6/2011 10:54:00 PM
Terrific write Don! I love the last lines, especially the "so it's now up the creek"...a so very ah-ha moment!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/7/2011 1:03:00 AM
Beware of snakes n salesmen, dodge sideways from their lies,
Date: 10/6/2011 10:53:00 PM
Great wordplay. Some lessons never get learned. That snake catches that bird again and again.
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/7/2011 1:04:00 AM
surely john as the sun do rise, the snake will surely hypnotise...
Date: 10/6/2011 7:09:00 PM
Very entertaining..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2011 7:06:00 PM
cactus and succulents grow good in florida. didja know and rock on~N
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Nancy Jones
Date: 10/6/2011 7:56:00 PM
dude, you're GOOD!
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/6/2011 7:47:00 PM
cactus ratshoot was the bird, after the snake had scoffed him on, a sweet delight, and he was gone, anon, too right momma...

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