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Beast Troika

Beast Troika B east trio ,in front the leader is king kong E erie,misty,demonic figures eyeing with reddish hues A rmy of black ,gigantic hairy statures S tand all armoured in battle to confront T eeth snarling for enemies to destroy. 11/2/15 For poetry contest”In 5 lines or less#1”

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Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 6/16/2016 4:54:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciating words....best wishes

Dominic Amezimi

Date: 6/2/2016 5:31:00 AM

Nice and pretty in imagery...

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2015 1:57:00 PM

An excellent interpretation, and presented in acrostic form, too, Rizwana! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/11/2015 10:00:00 PM

Thank you , Wish you the same Regards

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2015 9:34:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning acrostic rizwana!

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/11/2015 10:01:00 PM

Thank you....Regards

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/8/2015 9:51:00 AM

Hi Rizwana: Fantastic Acrostic! Congrats on your win!

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 7:17:00 PM

Thank you,....regards

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/8/2015 6:32:00 AM

Congrats to win Feeling so happy on your placemaent Anisha D

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 7:19:00 PM

THNX...happy to see you happy for me

Samiha Zubair

Date: 11/8/2015 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations on being the winner in the contest

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 7:20:00 PM

thank you.....regards

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2015 8:25:00 PM

wow, you did it acrostically. That was smart thinking. Congrats on your win.

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 12:55:00 AM

Thnx for your uplifting comment. You made my day

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 6:19:00 PM

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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 12:58:00 AM

Thnx..it's an encouraging gesture for me...this placement means a lot to me..Sure i' ll visit your blog..wanna be fearless...

A. Juman

Date: 11/5/2015 7:01:00 PM

wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think

Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/8/2015 1:00:00 AM

Thnx,sure I will

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/2/2015 11:28:00 PM

Jazakallah khair SIR