Bearing Wind a Seed

who plucked my flower
stealing her innocent spring
bearing wind a seed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 20, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Shane regaling with a tale of shame! Interesting second line. I think the growing season (Spring) is indeed the life-giving flow or heart of the flower!
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January 20, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Hello Shane, This is a beautiful Haiku and I loved reading it this morning. Thank you for sharing As Always, Shar
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