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The sun Illuminates Exposes fog's presence Beams of light bounce through the thickness Reveals

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/25/2015 3:46:00 PM
Hi Sara, Happy Memorial Day!!
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:20:00 PM
Love your image of the sun exposing the fog. To me fog always feels kind of sinister, like it is sneaking around.
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:39:00 AM
A great picture emerged like magic; well done.
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:57:00 PM
stunning imagery. SKAT
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Date: 5/22/2015 4:57:00 PM
I like this one and the picture really shows it!!
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Date: 5/22/2015 2:44:00 PM
Enjoyed this immensely Sara.'
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:43:00 PM
beauty ... that is all.. Linda
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Date: 5/22/2015 11:02:00 AM
A very descriptive cinquain, Sara! Well done. Love, Kim
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