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Beams of Light

The sun Illuminates Exposes fog's presence Beams of light bounce through the thickness Reveals
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Hi Sara, Happy Memorial Day!!
Sirak Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Love your image of the sun exposing the fog. To me fog always feels kind of sinister, like it is sneaking around.
Kiser Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 6:39 AM
A great picture emerged like magic; well done.
A  Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 11:57 PM
stunning imagery. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 4:57 PM
I like this one and the picture really shows it!!
Maverick Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Enjoyed this immensely Sara.'
A   Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 1:43 PM
beauty ... that is all.. Linda
Merryman Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:02 AM
A very descriptive cinquain, Sara! Well done. Love, Kim
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