Beaded Beats - Bt

The streets are filled Water meets earth Tune of "Rain beats" 12.07.2020
For Charles Messina's "Bauk Than - Than Bauk" contest
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Messina Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Well done, Jo. Congrats on your win!
Watt Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Very nice, Jo. perfect for this time of year. Best wishes in the BT contest ~ John
One Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Nice one Jo
Mcintosh Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Love it, Jo!!! Brilliant words. God bless you always
Y. Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Hi Jo, You created a lovely image with words. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 11:37 PM
You pinpointed perfectly your idea. ~~
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December 6, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Nice play on words Jo. Good luck in the contest.
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