Beaches

Beaches

I watch as the waves crash onto the shore,
such force with which they ride.
The shells which lie so peaceful there,
are swept out with the tide.

In and out it continuously flows,
content yet stirring inside.
The waves they crash so furiously,
yet no one ere knows why.

Sometimes I stand and watch in awe,
the ocean's battle cry.
It is as if it never knew,
what beauties lay inside.

Perhaps one day the sea will quietly wash
onto the shore,
Stop to take a look and see,
there really is no war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/5/2010 8:29:00 PM
Lovely thoughts jerri and your last line is extremely positive ..let us all pray for the day of no war.. my son being in the military this is especially precious to me... thankxxx for sharing this lovely poem Jerri... luv..
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Date: 7/5/2010 4:59:00 PM
You are going so great and then the last verse..kind..fizzles...be the best you can be work a bit more on the last verse and perhaps even put 1 more before it? Let the conclusion be as GREAT as the first 3 verses? HUGS! Light & love
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:14:00 PM
This one quite profound, jerri. I really enjoyed seeing your poetry of July! You seem very prolific. ARe you perhaps in Washington state? I lived there a long time ago as a child. (a very depressing state it was, too much rain!) Goodnight now. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2010 12:35:00 PM
Good imagery in this one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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