Lindsay Laurie Poet Rhyme

Beachcombing

Waiting, watching, listening for the storm to reach the shore.
Swirling the waters cauldron; lifting the ocean floor.
Relocating and destroying - beachcombing aft the wind has blown.
Walk the sands of turmoil - collecting cuttlebone.

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Jennifer Proxenos June 13, 2019 at 3:09 PM Hi Lindsay - beachcombing and collecting cuttlebone - looked it up - would love to make jewelry out of cuttlebone, must start beachcombing! Very enjoyable write Lindsay - thank-you! Hugs, Jennifer.

Jeanne Mcgee June 9, 2019 at 5:46 PM Your words just make me want to have a storm blow in! And go beachcombing, a favorite thing...so thank you for words well defined. Jeanne Lindsay Laurie June 10, 2019 at 8:06 PM Hello Jeanne … I too, often got enjoyment when rugged up on a winters day watching a raging tempest and hearing how powerful Mother Nature can be as the waves crash into rock formations. Thank you Jeanne - Lindsay

Gordon Mcconnell June 7, 2019 at 3:14 PM You paint a picture so encapturing Lindsay, such fine imagery and insightful thought. Excellent indeed! Lindsay Laurie June 10, 2019 at 8:02 PM Such a positive comment Gordon. Thank you, and I'm pleased that you enjoyed this verse - catch you soon Gordon - Lindsay

Panagiota Romios June 7, 2019 at 12:41 PM Great piece. I miss seing the ocean so much. And that Golden Gate Bridge.. Panagiota Lindsay Laurie June 10, 2019 at 8:00 PM Hello Panagiota … it's a real divide isn't it. We scan the ocean and wonder what mystery for us lies below the surface - thank you Panagiota - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong June 7, 2019 at 10:35 AM Just being in the presence of the ocean with its negative ions refreshes the body and soul Lindsay. We need to do all we can to stop pollution. A wonderful expression of love for the seashore my friend. Have a wonderful day. xxoo Lindsay Laurie June 10, 2019 at 7:57 PM Thank you for your comment Connie. To walk the shoreline offers some new discovery almost every time. Pity about the plastic though - have a nice day Connie - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2019 at 7:54 PM this is really really nice, Lindsay. Love it. Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 8:03 PM Hello Andrea … pleased you liked this one. When I kept aviary birds, a couple of times during winter, when it was cold, wet, and windy, I would the shore collecting cuttlebone, shells, and driftwood that the angry sea released - thanks again Andrea - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2019 at 8:48 PM Emotive write! Love it! Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:24 PM Hello Kim … thanks for reading and I'm pleased you enjoyed this verse - Lindsay

Harry Horsman June 4, 2019 at 4:11 PM Excellent poetry, love the message. Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:23 PM Hello there Harry … Pleased you enjoyed, and thanks for commenting Harry - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire June 3, 2019 at 10:32 PM Nice poem, nice rhythm, I like it! Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:22 PM G'day Timothy … thank you Timothy. Pleased you enjoyed this - Lindsay

Jan Allison June 3, 2019 at 6:12 PM beautifully descriptive Lindsay - not sure what we would find on our beaches - we are lucky we have an organisation called 'beach buddies' to remove all un natural debris - still find driftwood and shells though!:-) hugs Jan xx Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:20 PM Hello Jan … unfortunately for too long the waterways and seas have been used as a dumping ground. Perhaps one day this might change - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta June 3, 2019 at 5:54 PM More likely to find micro-plastics, even Down Under, but it is a nice reminder of how pleasant a day at the shore used to be! Aloha! Rico Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:18 PM Yes Rico … the old saying 'out of sight out of mind' has been effective for so long as another plastic bag goes overboard - thanks Rico - Lindsay

Nette Onclaud June 3, 2019 at 5:13 PM our waters seem to have a mood of their own... splendid piece, lindsay!..huggs Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:16 PM Hello nette … the seas are full of mystery that have not been discovered yet. It is a wonderful world below the surface - thanks nette - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham June 3, 2019 at 4:07 AM You never know what will get washed up. Lindsay Laurie June 6, 2019 at 7:14 PM Correct Tom … the sea gives up many treasures. Thanks Mate - Lindsay