Beach Walkers

tiny waves tickle
footprints gently washed away
firmly holding hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 10:29 PM
Bullseye, Peter. The 'firmness' shouts its defiance. Superb senryu. ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Lovely imagery, Peter.
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