Beach Walk

Out on the shores,
So cold and still,
She beckons for
Her void to fill

Her lonely beach
Waits for my feet,
Her empty skies,
My eyes to see

Through wisps of wind,
She calls my name;
She takes my sins
And kills my pain

And in this place
I am content – 
On sun soaked sand
My soul finds rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wilson Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 11:00 PM
Woooh, i love the end, couldn't have wrapped it up any better, good job. Id appreciate it if you could take a look at a few of my poems and be brutally honest and tell me what you think
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 9:57 AM
I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Nick. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Well expressed thought
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