Beach Sandcastle

Written: October 31, 2023
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Sea-veiled land has emeralds with shamrock
Green grass has a soft and carpet-like hue
Sandcastle at the beach with hay and rock
Sea-veiled land has emeralds with shamrock
The sun shines radiant gold, bathes, and shocks
That it might be over soon with no clue.
Sea-veiled land has emeralds with shamrock
Green grass has a soft and carpet-like hue

analogyappreciationbeachhousetriolet

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Vijay Pandit

November 1, 2023 at 6:21 AM

Sea-veiled land has emeralds with shamrock Green grass has a soft and carpet-like hue Sandcastle at the beach with hay and rock--beautiful images. Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, my friend.

Ink Empress

October 31, 2023 at 11:15 PM

Beautiful triolet, so well written with such soul warming imagery! I absolutely love the line “ The sun shines radiant gold, bathes, and shocks“ how gorgeous! and the way you’ve written also sea veiled land and emeralds, gives such an island vibe that truly resonate and is magical and touching! Profound triolet! As always your rhymes too are so unique! And the way you’ve also delivered so much depth through descriptive lines is impeccable! Sending you light always . Pleasure reading you

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