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Beach - Hiku

molten gold kiss shores
cobalt sky hugs sea
enthralling serene beach

26-11-2021

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10th gradehaiku

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Paula Goldsmith

December 13, 2021 at 11:19 AM

I love your "beach - Hiku" write and pretty picture. I wish I was walking that beach of yours. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........................

Krish Radhakrishna

December 9, 2021 at 12:31 AM

very nice Rama! Must be the golden beech in chennai!

Jennifer Proxenos

December 4, 2021 at 6:37 AM

Wow Rama I don't think anyone could describe this splendid scene better than you have in both visual and poetic form. Kudos. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.