Beach Ambience

without doubt the sea

         hued embellished blue carpet

                     don't trample the view

allusionbeachblessinghaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

July 9, 2021 at 4:11 AM

That last line - I hope we all understand it, and give the beach her "due".

Jan Allison

July 2, 2021 at 9:30 AM

lovely haiku and great message Lasaad:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

July 2, 2021 at 9:45 AM

Appreciate your kind words, Jan. Thanks for your great visit and comment. Blessings and warm hugs

Brian Sambourne

July 2, 2021 at 9:11 AM

Wonderful! I appreciate your fine Haiku with its environmental concern. So well penned. Best wishes, Brian

Sotto Poet

July 2, 2021 at 9:26 AM

Appreciate your genus comment Brian, have a wonderful weekend.

L Milton Hankins

July 1, 2021 at 1:51 PM

A reminder that we must respect the pristine beauty of the beach and the sea. Your haiku is beautifully illustrated, too.

Irfanulla Shariff

July 1, 2021 at 10:07 AM

Well envisioned and nicely composed Haiku! Thanks for sharing, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet

July 1, 2021 at 1:22 PM

Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate your genus words. It's a pleasure to interact with you, and I will be visiting your page very soon. Blessings and best regards.