Beach

The waves are calm, it's the feeling i crave 
the heat of the sun washing away my defeat 
And all the hard things of life just fall
Our time at the beach is encompassed in rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 11:28 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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May 12, 2026 at 7:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Aaina Aroda, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Aaina, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 5:40 AM
- A lovely little rhyme poem Aaina :) - Welcome to P Soup :) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Aaina, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 28, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Aaina,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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