Beach

The waves are calm, it's the feeling i crave the heat of the sun washing away my defeat And all the hard things of life just fall Our time at the beach is encompassed in rhyme

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 11:23:00 PM

Aaina Aroda, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2015 12:57:00 PM

Aaina, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2015 5:40:00 AM

- A lovely little rhyme poem Aaina :) - Welcome to P Soup :) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2015 9:24:00 PM

Aaina, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2015 8:34:00 PM

Aaina,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@