Beach

I'm all alone with pen in reach
on this  solitary beach.
I must create as words command.
I'm peopling this lonely land
and making castles out of  sand.

In the place where words won't reach
the lie is told there's one for each.
With solitary pen in hand.
I tried and tried to understand;
to make word castles out of sand.

I am alone, there's none in reach
I'm only left this lonely beach.
The pen slips from my tired hand.
Perhaps one day, I'll understand.
There was a castle, made of sand.

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written  for John Heck's Contest:BLINK! to reflect the theme of  LONELINESS.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Very creative lyrical poem with apt rhyming, may be more effective if read aloud, Dory
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September 23, 2010 at 9:49 PM
Dory a nice entry, good luck" Nate D.
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